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rough cut + audience feedback
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- theres this intense starting music then it cuts to silence, it doesnt trasnsition smoothly
-rushed into it from the start, i wasnt ready for it
-the flashes are interesting it makes it flow better
-the one black an white shot is vital, i love it
-gets messy at the end, too many things happeening at once
-there is no need to see lakeisha walking for like 10 years
-i like the addition of the lock, it fills in the gap betwen some shots, before it was empty
-director was spelt wrong
-transitions seem more purposeful, not just random lights flashing
-shorter shots are easier to watch now
-two minutes is long i felt like was watching a short film
-music goes perfectly with what im visually seeing, it climaxes and calmes down at the right time
-why is there a lock there, bit random
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